Asked by Ameer Adane on Jun 25, 2024

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The following sentences form an essay. Proofread them for consistency, parallelism, and concise language. Select the letter of the error in each sentence. Gradually, attitudes toward soap began to change and did not stay the same.

A) consistency
B) parallelism
C) concise language

Consistency

The quality of achieving a level of performance or the adherence to a pattern or standard without significant variation.

Concise Language

The use of few words to convey an idea effectively without unnecessary detail or filler.

  • Improve written clarity by purging writing of unnecessary and duplicative words.
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YA
Yazan AbubakerJul 01, 2024
Final Answer :
C
Explanation :
The phrase "began to change and did not stay the same" is repetitive and can be condensed into "changed." This improves the clarity and conciseness of the sentence.